Fall to spring ~ a poem

Hey Inquisitive Writers! Today, January 16th happens to be my birthday! So I decided to write a poem of fall to spring. Enjoy!


You hear the children laughing,

the leaves turning red,


and yellow

And falling slowly

Pumpkin picking in farms down east

The crisp, chill air

that is nostalgic

But the wind blows



and more powerful

than ever before..

Stressed and deprived,

riding in the snow

late to work

Or is the snow riding them?

Controlling us?

Chapped lips,

and dry hands,


the flu,

bare trees,

and sunken hearts..

And they run off, leaving their footsteps

in the snow, for


better places

Yet they come back,

eager for changes

Like singing birds,

melting snow,

and sunny days

Fields of dandelions,

colorful eggs,

worms on wet pavement,

and Mexican celebration…

Although winter seems to last long,

let it go

Spring will always come back

And make the most of it πŸ™‚


I made this poem to convey a theme; don’t hold grudges or think of the past too much (winter), and make most of the happy moments (spring) Do you think there is another theme? What did this poem mean to you?Β 

P.S., I don’t actually hate winter, I just revolved the story around to fit the themeΒ 

  1. Wonderful poem!! I love your word choice. Can’t wait for spring! πŸ™‚

    1. Thank you so much! Can’t wait for spring, too.

  2. Great poem! Belated birthday wishes πŸŽ‚πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰

    1. Thank you so much!

  3. Looks great! Beautifully written πŸ™‚ Nice content. If you have time, maybe you could also visit my blog. Thanks! πŸ™‚ Have a great day!

    1. Thanks! And, sure, I’ll check out your blog!

  4. Oh I love this! Totally worked with the theme you’ve mentioned below…Well for me, it painted a picture in my mind of struggles (winter) & happy moments (spring). ☺

    1. Thank you!

  5. Beautiful interpretion of the seasons changing. I’m glad I checked out your blog, it’s great!

    1. Aw thank you!

      1. No problem xx

  6. Beautiful! Love love love it!

    1. Thank you!

  7. this was beautifully written x

    1. Thanks!

  8. Did you created that whole poem by yourself or you found it on the internet?

    1. 100% by me!

      1. Oh.. ok!! Xp

  9. I nominated you for the Mystery Blogger Award. https://poetry2473.wordpress.com/2017/01/20/mystery-blogger-award/
    I’d love for you to participate but it’s totally your choice.

    1. Thank you! I’ll try to do it soon.

      1. Yay! You’re welcome 😊

  10. Gorgeously written, really enjoyed this πŸ™‚ Excited to have found your blog!
    Abby | https://seafoaming.com

    1. Thanks!

  11. Happy Belated Birthday. Wishing you all the best

    1. Thank you!

  12. I’m a little late but Happy Birthday! =D

    1. Thank you!

  13. Happy birthday! Love your poem!

    1. Thanks so much!

  14. Beautiful poem and happy birthday!

    1. Thank you!

      1. You’re welcome! <3

  15. Happy Birthday lovely! You have such an amazing blog; I love love love reading your posts everyday! <3 πŸ™‚

    1. Thank you so much!

  16. Happy birthday and nice poem 😊

    1. Thank you!

  17. HAPPY BIRTHDAY!πŸŽ‰πŸŽ I hope you have a great & fun-filled day! I love the poem & the message conveyed from it!πŸ‘πŸ˜Š Awesome writing talent! Keep it up! ❀️❀️❀️

    1. Thank you very much!!

  18. Happy birthday Jo!

    1. Thanks!

  19. “The crisp chill air that is nostalgic…” Lovely, Jo. Happy birthday πŸ™‚ <3

    1. Thank you so much!

  20. Happy Birthday! great poem

    1. Thanks!

  21. Happy Birthday!

    1. Thank you!

  22. beautifully written πŸ™‚

    1. Thank you!!

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