Live your life!

Hey Inquisitive writers! I wrote this poem a long time ago, and decided to post it here. Check it out below ⬇️

I’ve never seen so much fire

in her eyes

Determination,

bravery,

courage

Things that never lie

Do less of the talking

and more of the saying

Less of the hearing

and more of the listening

Actions say more that words,

but hurry up,

you’ve only got so much time

in this world 🌎

This message I tried to convey in this poem is that you should work hard, be honest, and LIVE YOUR LIFE, because you have limited time here. 

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27 comments
  1. This is beautiful!

    1. Aw thanks!

  2. I love this post of yours! We all can achieve great things in our lives 🙂

    1. Thank you so much!

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  4. I like it! 👍 That picture of the river reminds me of the rush from the rapids in the Shenandoah River, Canada.

    1. Thank you! Great connection.

    1. Thanks for the comment!

  5. Beautifully crafted. Love it!

    1. Thank you!

  6. Do less of talking and more of saying; its wonderful line of an amazing poem. Enjoyed it and hope you will enjoy at my site too. Waiting for your feedback

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  8. beautiful poem and very nicely written! 🙂 xxx

    1. Thank you!

  9. A great poem.

    Thank you for writing it.

      1. You’re welcome!

  10. Wow. I just loved how you emphasized that talking and saying, and hearing and listening could make such huge differences. Great! Keep writing! ☺

    1. Thank you so much!

  11. This is so good! Great post 🙂

    1. Thank you!

  12. This is a great poem Jo – loved the words and the message behind them – so true.

    1. Thank you!

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